The Old Clock and Playtime

This first layout I did with an old family story about a family heirloom. I know you won't be able to read it, but its an interesting story, and in the copy I have printed out, I can read it.

Credit: Teri Hanson's Journey through time, May crop kit.

If anyone wants to tell me how I could have done this better I would welcome your input!! Maybe a two page layout would have been better??? I don't know. We have lots of family stories, that would be cool to have with pictures and all but getting them all into a layout could be hard since they are longer than a page would hold
with pictures and still be large enough to be readable easiely. This one could have used a little bigger font, but it is readable.

This 2nd layout is me when I was 5. Probably showing off for the camera! LOL

Credit: The Scrapping Garden's Grand Opening Kit.